There WERE many others
Very nice choice of music, it went extremly well with this slow-word-appear-during-"tragic"-event movie. You need to make the screen a lot bigger, and at first I thought it would be nice to see red blood, but the colors went well with the style of the movie. Another nice choice, but I think it would have been better if it ended right after; "he just didn't have the money" and it showed him swinging. Having a cliche drug moral was stupid.